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What’s in the box?

07 Jul

In Literacy we’ll be continuing thinking about the idea of magic boxes. Watch this video from the fabulous Literacy ShedWhat is in the box? What would you do if a box like this appeared?

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29 responses to “What’s in the box?

  1. dw hk js

    July 8, 2013 at 11:19 am

    we would climb inside and investagate.

     
  2. sn

    July 8, 2013 at 11:20 am

    There is a golden mango from Africa in the box.

    If I found a box like that I would open it up because I would be so curio.se

     
  3. AF SP

    July 8, 2013 at 11:22 am

    If a box came up infrunt of one of us we would open it and then jump in it.

     
  4. dw hk js

    July 8, 2013 at 11:23 am

    and found 1000,000,00 juglers and a magic castle

     
  5. LK HBM

    July 8, 2013 at 11:25 am

    I would make a stable for my toy horses.
    I would make a nice comfortable home for my toys.

     
  6. EO + AH

    July 8, 2013 at 11:27 am

    I wouid just jump on it to see whats in side the box.also i would check if anyone was around.
    If i was packing it i would put 5 wishes and anything sweet.
    I would think of what would be inside the box before i would break in.
    I would use my 5 wishes for…..
    going absaling,
    going to centre parks,
    to move to a giant house with a giant swimming pool in a giant garden,
    to be a queen,
    and for a thousand more wishes.

     
  7. dw hk js

    July 8, 2013 at 11:27 am

    and he got locked in the castle and not out for one year

     
  8. sn

    July 8, 2013 at 11:28 am

    There is a woolly hat made out of sheeps wool in the box.

    If a box like that apeared I would pouncxe on it with fright.

     
  9. jjs bgc

    July 8, 2013 at 11:28 am

    i think in the box could be a penguin or fish!!1$£100:)

     
  10. FH and AM-C

    July 8, 2013 at 11:28 am

    MAGICALL things.toffies CHOCOLATE and more.

     
  11. cc rmc

    July 8, 2013 at 11:28 am

    I would pick it up and shake it then I would check if theres anything inside, anyway I think it would be fruit or somthing crazy like that rmcs idea . My idea i think it would be somthing or someone to keep him company.I would put my ear on the side to see if i could hear anythin incase it was somthing evil

     
  12. FH and AM-C

    July 8, 2013 at 11:32 am

    I think that theres a krateypersen.

     
  13. LK HBM

    July 8, 2013 at 11:33 am

    We would make a pretend town with shops,activity centers,vets,homes and woodlands.

     
  14. AF SP

    July 8, 2013 at 11:34 am

    The box would be magical and special just for me and would be covered in choclate and sweets
    all gatherd up in a cholate trian.

     
  15. EH EC

    July 8, 2013 at 11:34 am

    We think that anything could happen that there will be a golden pear and a trampoline that will bounce us up above the clouds.We think that there will be a baby fairy that will give us 3 wishes each that come true!!!!!!!!!

     
  16. MB and PC

    July 8, 2013 at 11:35 am

    We would wonder what would be inside and run over to the amazing box jump in to it and find my self in a hot tub jumping up and down and i would be amazed because it would be SO FUN jumping on this incredible bouncy hot tub.

     
  17. cc rmc

    July 8, 2013 at 11:35 am

    I would open the box and find some chocolate with caremel choclate and cream oozing out and ice cream stuck inside with a juicey middle

     
  18. ww rl

    July 8, 2013 at 11:35 am

    if I saw a magic box I wood jump inside and eat cake and stroberrys in a palis.

     
  19. dw hk js

    July 8, 2013 at 11:35 am

    i would jump in the box and investigate in evory corna and find all off the crown jewls and find lots gems and fly on the hieghest zip wire in the world

     
  20. EO + AH

    July 8, 2013 at 11:36 am

    When i am in the box i will step in to a magic cloud that lifts me to a magical land, i will have water fights and there will be candy floss trees and cake sales lollie pop trees you can lick. the ice cream van will come when ever we call

     
  21. sn

    July 8, 2013 at 11:36 am

    I would kick it to see what noise it would make,
    In the box there would be
    A golden mango from Africa,
    a bouncy trampoline that could bounce me up to space,
    a woolly hat made from sheeps wool,
    all my friends,
    a hot tub
    and the whole world.

     
  22. Hp

    July 8, 2013 at 11:36 am

    If a box like that apeared I would probobly open it and look inside to see what was in it.

     
  23. FH and AM-C

    July 8, 2013 at 11:36 am

    a swiming pool to jump in to A CANDY STORE
    insted of rian tofes

    YUM YUM

     
  24. jjs bgc

    July 8, 2013 at 11:38 am

    there could be a: alions , chocolate, cakes, doors to the past and future, 1000`s of animals and people and a whole town!!1$£100:)

     
  25. jc & gw

    July 8, 2013 at 11:38 am

    We think that the box is a, jack in the box that was alive and then it started to sing : have you ever seen a penguin come to tea.

     
  26. sc ndg

    July 8, 2013 at 11:45 am

    We think there will be loads of friut and more seeds for the friut tree…
    But right at the bottom of the box will be a handle that turns automaticly so he dosent have to turn it him self.

     
  27. Rob Smith (@redgierob)

    July 9, 2013 at 9:31 pm

    Hi Guys, Mr Smith here, I am the owner of The Literacy Shed, I am glad your teacher came to my shed and showed you this video, you have come up with some great ideas. I would love to get a magic box like this – I would like to think that each day when you opened it then it contained your wildest dreams, changing each day, some days fun and some days best left alone. What would be in there if it contained your dreams?

     

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