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Home Learning 1-3-2013

28 Feb

This week’s home learning task is to complete either the 100 Word or 5 Sentence Challenge. You can add your response to the blog as a comment, or you can write it in your book.

The 100 Word Challenge prompt for this week is quite a simple one. It is:

…the car stopped suddenly…

Make sure you keep to the 100 word limit and do go and visit at least 2 other pieces from different schools on the 100 Word blog.]

The 5 Sentence Challenge prompt is a picture. Try to write 5 interesting sentences about the image and see if you can vary the word you start the sentence with.

 

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22 responses to “Home Learning 1-3-2013

  1. michael

    February 28, 2013 at 8:09 pm

    I like your video. from (michael , Alberta Canada)

     
  2. Gr. 2F

    February 28, 2013 at 9:47 pm

    Wow! We couldn’t believe it when we saw your post. We just finished doing the 100 Word Challenge. Maybe you can find time to read ours and we’ll go on the 100 Word Challenge to read yours!

    Grade 2 BES

     
    • mrcobbsclass

      March 1, 2013 at 4:40 pm

      Great idea. Will try to have a look.

       
  3. clara

    March 2, 2013 at 4:08 pm

    A long time ago lived a bully named princess.She thought that her name was what she was.Everyone was afraid of her because her tantrums ended up with a hole in the wall and someone bleeding.She became so mean that she charged at the teacher in lessons she didn’t like and the teacher once got sent to hospital with a broken hip.On that day a kid said wow and princess punched him in the tummy then he said ow painfully.Next thing was the kid got picked up early.One day she turned into a nice girl.

     
    • mrcobbsclass

      March 6, 2013 at 8:04 pm

      An interesting piece Clara.

      Star: I like the way the girl saw the error of her ways.
      Wish: make sure you check through for punctuation and capitals. Sometimes you miss them out.
      Star: the words tantrum and painfully are good word choices.

       
  4. HorseLoverETP

    March 3, 2013 at 8:43 am

    Great Story Clara,
    Were you doing it for the 100 word challenge?If so then you forgot to add,
    the car stopped suddenly.

     
  5. clara

    March 3, 2013 at 9:47 am

    One day in Bushling Town Maisy a girl gave some news that cars had been invented.My mum wanted one but she said she wanted it to be cheap, so she bought a cheap one. She drove the car home, as she got on the drive the car stopped suddenly and we got out and went inside .I hugged Dad and snuggled down to watch T V.After 4 hours T V it was 8 oo pm so i had to go to bed.I didn’t get to sleep till 12.00 o’ clock.I was exhausted the next morning and wanted to fall asleep.

     
    • mrcobbsclass

      March 3, 2013 at 3:56 pm

      Great writing Clara. I like your use of commas to add an extra part to the sentence. Well done.

       
  6. billy

    March 3, 2013 at 10:24 am

    one day there was a man called billy driving a long boat down the river. sudenly he slipped and fell in the water. luckily jack was riding his bike ulong the road. jack threw a life ring into the water and pulled him to the road. then they got some bread and buns from the bakery and went home.

     
    • mrcobbsclass

      March 3, 2013 at 3:55 pm

      Great writing Billy. I like the ideas and especially the way you varied your sentence starts! Remember those capital letters.

       
  7. Natalie!32 horse lover!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    March 3, 2013 at 7:09 pm

    Hi, you know when I was in your class we used a thing called bubble somthing, can you tell me the whole name and adress, thanks

     
    • mrcobbsclass

      March 3, 2013 at 9:26 pm

      It’s Bubbl.us – type in to Google.

       
      • Natalie!32 horse lover!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

        March 4, 2013 at 4:27 pm

        thanks!!!!

         
  8. Hannah

    March 5, 2013 at 8:04 pm

    One sunny day,me,Iona and Alex all woke up and I went to wake up mum and Dad.Mum said that we could go to the beach so we ate our cereal and got in the car.we were almost there when the car stoped suddenly!A cow had walked in to the middle of the road and was staring at us.Finaly the cow walked off the road and we were able to get to the beach.We had a lovely time at the beach and we had a picnic lunch and then we went home for tea.

     
    • mrcobbsclass

      March 6, 2013 at 8:08 pm

      Well done Hannah,

      Star: I like your use of finally to link the last section of the story to the previous sentence.
      Wish: Try to vary your sentences, don’t over use we….. You could use a character name, or start a sentence with some speech or an adverb instead.
      Star: Using Iona is a great choice of name. It makes her sound interesting.

       
  9. louis owls

    March 6, 2013 at 5:49 pm

    well done badgers some great writing.

     
  10. Sophie

    March 6, 2013 at 7:23 pm

    The 100 Word Challenge
    The car stopped suddenly … there in front of them was an amazing glowing white unicorn. Where could it have come from? Maybe the new girl who had just moved in down the street or the mean girl called Lidia in my class. Who knows? I think the new girl is the owner of this magical unicorn because she keeps looking out the window in class like she wanted school to be over so she could go home and see something or someone. I decided that at the end of the day I would follow her and find out more.

    By Sophie Nurse

     
    • mrcobbsclass

      March 6, 2013 at 8:32 pm

      Well done Sophie.

      Star: I like the way you used the prompt at the start to get action happening straight away.
      Wish: Make sure you keep the same tense within each sentence.
      Star: Using rhetorical questions like you have really draws in the reader. Great work.

       
  11. mrcobbsclass

    March 6, 2013 at 8:34 pm

    You may want to try this week’s challenge too. Its at http://100wc.net/100wc/week22a/

     
  12. Amc

    March 10, 2013 at 10:20 am

    One breezy summer day me and my famliy went for a drive then the cxar stopped suddliy.They went in themiddle of the road .Oh no there is not enny petrol stashons. A nouver car came it was my cousons lukliy mycousons had some petrol in the bake of the car .Then my famliy said thank you to them. then myfamliy arangs for them to come over they said yes pleas id love to come over we can play with my mounster hightthen they went home it took thembutwe gothome the end.

     
  13. Anonymous

    March 19, 2013 at 2:36 pm

    I REALLY ENJOYED WRITING MY STORY

     

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