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Olympic Shape Poems

10 Jul

Have a look at these poems created using @winningpoetry’s Poetry Generator.ย What do you think of them? What has been done well? What could be improved?

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Posted by on July 10, 2012 in Information

 

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22 responses to “Olympic Shape Poems

  1. Rm Horse Lover

    July 10, 2012 at 1:51 pm

    These are really good poems i really liked ETP and KG ‘s they are all really good!!!!!

     
  2. TS & NL

    July 10, 2012 at 1:52 pm

    We loved doing the poems they were to do with the olympics ๐Ÿ™‚

     
  3. AG WH

    July 10, 2012 at 1:52 pm

    We really like all of them but the one that stands out the most is Rc and Lc’s one.

    We really liked the part when it sais i went past Usain Bolt yay
    A bit to improve on is the silliness because it got a bit jokey.
    Overall it is really good, Well Done

     
  4. KG SB

    July 10, 2012 at 1:52 pm

    We really liked them all, especially the one that had the adrenalin bit in.

     
  5. Rufus199

    July 10, 2012 at 1:52 pm

    ๐Ÿ˜€ : The poems sound great
    ๐Ÿ˜ฆ : They could rhyme
    ๐Ÿ˜€ : The sentences fit in well

     
    • mrcobbsclass

      July 10, 2012 at 1:54 pm

      Why should they rhyme RC? Not all poems rhyme? In fact many don’t!

       
      • Rufus199

        July 10, 2012 at 1:55 pm

        Well you can not rhyme but most poems rhyme. Exeception: Michael Rosen. q:)

         
  6. KH MK

    July 10, 2012 at 1:53 pm

    we like them all i think it is a brillint way of writhing poertry. ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

     
  7. ETP Horse lover

    July 10, 2012 at 1:54 pm

    i loved those poems. there was lots of description.

     
  8. BDG EW LEGO Builders

    July 10, 2012 at 1:54 pm

    These are all grate poems, but there are some weird spelling mistakes like: wjll

     
  9. amag

    July 10, 2012 at 1:54 pm

    They were so cool! I want to do that again. I really like that website i would like to do some other things on that same website. It was really exciting.

     
  10. HS

    July 10, 2012 at 1:54 pm

    I think that MK TS is really good but i also think that everyone elses is really good to.

     
  11. SH+LL lego masters

    July 10, 2012 at 1:54 pm

    We think that number 4 is good but most people would miss out the “i” at the begining because it’s far awayfrom the other words.

     
  12. SB and FHC

    July 10, 2012 at 1:55 pm

    we both liked SB and RM because it was intresting

     
  13. LS EG

    July 10, 2012 at 1:55 pm

    I really like the idea of the Olympic poems it was really fun

     
  14. LC user1

    July 10, 2012 at 1:55 pm

    STAR: good poetry
    WISH: some to make morew sense
    STAR: good website to use

     
  15. HC FB

    July 10, 2012 at 1:55 pm

    I THINK THEY WERE BRILLIANT AND I REALLY LIKE RUFUS’ POEM

     
  16. Anonymous

    July 11, 2012 at 5:42 pm

    Great poetry and presentation – what package did you use?

     
    • mrcobbsclass

      July 11, 2012 at 6:31 pm

      It used the website mentioned in previous post. I’ll comment link later.

       
  17. @msbeenz

    July 12, 2012 at 7:57 am

    The Neinsteins are still on holiday in NZ! It is such a shame that you finish your year soon! We will check out your poems next week and they will be pure inspiration to them. If you don’t mind, we will use this same idea and compare your poems with ours…

     
    • mrcobbsclass

      July 12, 2012 at 3:22 pm

      That would be great. Have a great last part of the holidays!

       
  18. HorseLoverETP

    July 13, 2012 at 8:31 pm

    i mean our

     

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