100 WC Week 32 – Ed

29 May

I want to convince you London is the best place to spend your 2012 summer holiday. This summer London is hosting the Olympic Games. This only happens every four years. You can visit the Olympic stadium, the O2 or the cycling track. There is so much to do.

By spending your holiday in England you will help locals make money from their jobs. Tourists spend money in hotels, buying food and souvenirs.

Also you will enjoy the exciting landmarks there are in London. You can see from the London Eye, you can hide in Hyde Park and you can monkey around London Zoo!

Don’t go abroad because in London you won’t be bored!


Posted by on May 29, 2012 in Information



10 responses to “100 WC Week 32 – Ed

  1. mrcobbsclass

    May 29, 2012 at 9:23 am

    Great persuasive writing Ed, I’m really impressed and really persuaded of London’s claim to be a star holiday location. Well done! Star performance.

  2. Es famous singer

    May 29, 2012 at 1:38 pm

    THANK YOU!!!!

    MR COBB!!!!
    🙂 😉

  3. Sb best footballer

    May 29, 2012 at 1:42 pm

    Very GOOD!!!!!!!!

  4. SB

    May 29, 2012 at 1:47 pm

    This is a really exciting piece of writing. It also is quite amusing which, to me, adds to the persuasivness. Well Done.

  5. BDG lego builder

    May 29, 2012 at 1:49 pm

    Wow! ed great persuasive writing well done BRILLIANT!

  6. SB

    May 29, 2012 at 5:07 pm

    Here is my 100 Word Challenge, week 32.

    To Ms Yapp,

    I am writing to ask if our school could get a pet for each of the classes. This would be a good idea,
    because we could start a new lesson about animals and caring for them. Also at the weekend we could have a rota for taking them home so you wouldn’t have to worry about their health and feed! Maybe we could do some fundraising. To cover all the costs for bedding, cages, feed etc. I hope you like my idea, and that I have persuaded you enough to carry my idea forward.

    Yours Sincerely,

  7. Mrs Skinner

    May 29, 2012 at 10:04 pm

    Really sorry Ed but this is on the wrong site. It is the 5SC. There were messages telling you to make sure it was on the right one!

    • mrcobbsclass

      May 30, 2012 at 9:48 am

      oops, that was my mistake. So Sorry Ed.

  8. am

    May 30, 2012 at 5:22 pm

    I think this is really good and I love the end because it rymes. 😉

  9. Ag

    June 13, 2012 at 8:54 am

    Love the idea, eddy, Now I really want to go there for the summer and have a great time. WELL DONE!!!!!!!!!!!! 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂


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