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Super Sentences

13 Mar

Have a look at these sentences we created in Literacy today. Which do you prefer? Why?

  1. It is a huge cube-shaped building covered in a large black cloth, with gold Arabic calligraphy.
  2. The Kabah is the house of Allah, it is a tall building in the middle of Mecca.
  3. The Kabah is a big building in the middle of Mecca, Muslims face towards it when they pray.
  4. The Kabah is a cube-shaped building, that Muslims pray towards.

 

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2 Comments

Posted by on March 13, 2012 in Information

 

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2 responses to “Super Sentences

  1. Mrs C

    March 13, 2012 at 1:54 pm

    I like the first one best, its the most descriptive. The others are good too andbetter if you need toknow where it is.

     
  2. KB

    March 13, 2012 at 2:28 pm

    Well done I really liked your sentences and I especially liked the bit that said ” The Kabah is a big building in the middle of Mecca, Muslims face towards it when they pray.”.

     

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