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100 WC Week 16 – Finlay

16 Jan

The soliders were marching along the straight roman road in the hot blistering sun. The local celts ambushed them from the dried up bushes and killed all the soliders in the legion. BUT!!! a little roman boy saw them all dead so he ran back and reported the British soliders to the bigger roman army. The roman soliders came and saw them dead aswell they were so shocked that they all fell over at once and pretended to be dead aswell so when the british soliders walked away the roman soliders killed them and took over the rest of Britan.

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Posted by on January 16, 2012 in Information

 

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7 responses to “100 WC Week 16 – Finlay

  1. MrsSmallbone (@MrsSmallbone)

    January 17, 2012 at 1:48 am

    Loving your writing, Guess what?…Room One is studying the Romans as well! We start by looking at the Ancient Romans then will see what happened when they invaded Britain. We are finding out what it means to be a Citizen…I think reading your classes 100WC work will really help my class!

     
  2. KG Animal lover

    January 17, 2012 at 7:16 am

    That was really good and i really enjoyed reading it. I didnt have a favourate part i liked all of the story , and i also like the way you have described the sun.How many words was it?

     
  3. meghanlydd

    January 18, 2012 at 2:26 pm

    Really good adjectives and adverbs you used
    well done!

     
  4. kailydd

    January 18, 2012 at 2:33 pm

    i loved it carry on writing

     
  5. asialydd

    January 18, 2012 at 2:47 pm

    wow a lot going on ! what a grat picture i have painted in my head !!!!!!

     
  6. ameliatlydd

    January 18, 2012 at 3:32 pm

    Good work! keep it up, I love all the details you put in! bye the way make sure to check our Blog out!keep it up!

     
  7. mrcobbsclass

    January 26, 2012 at 8:12 pm

    Really like this writing Fin, you’ve tried hard to include Roman details.

     

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