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Turtle Poetry

29 Nov

Have a look at these short poems inspired by the turtle in The Wreck of the Zanzibar. What do you think of them? What have they done well? What could be improved? Add your comments to this post. Click on the images to get larger images.

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Posted by on November 29, 2011 in Information

 

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7 responses to “Turtle Poetry

  1. Mrs Blair, Room 12

    November 30, 2011 at 1:55 am

    I really enjoyed reading the verbs you used in your poems. I met a turtle face to face for the first time last week. A student at our school brought it to show me and my class. Have you felt a turtles shell? What do you think it feels like?

     
  2. Natalie Lamont

    November 30, 2011 at 5:34 pm

    Doing the turtle poems was so fun and turtleish it was so inspiring to watch the film.

     
  3. horseloveretp

    November 30, 2011 at 7:55 pm

    i love them they are so lovely poems i especially like romys and katys

     
  4. Joseph

    December 1, 2011 at 12:26 am

    Hello Mr Cobb and class, they are some fantastic pieces of artwork on the turtle poetry. Did you enjoy this? It sounds and looks by the comments that you have had heaps of fun watching the film. Your class blog is great! I love your 100 word stories and it amazes me how well your class can blog and write stories! Please visit my blog at http://bbjoseph.edublogs.org/ .
    From Joseph at Busy Bees at the Bay

     
  5. Mrs H

    December 1, 2011 at 10:55 am

    Hi Mr Cobb’s class,
    We read your poems in class toady and really enjoyed them. At first we thought they were Haiku poetry but then realised they were free form. We really enjoyed the descriptive words that were used and the way you presented them.
    from Mrs H and 4/5 BH in Tasmania

     
  6. kenza

    December 14, 2011 at 2:18 pm

    ther really good 🙂

     
  7. reuben and Rufus

    December 14, 2011 at 2:19 pm

    I like how everybody thought about how turtles moves

     

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