100 WC Week 10 – Scarlett

She looked out across the calm turquoise sea to the vivid fire sunset. Alicia was on a safari holiday with her parents and today they had been out in the ancient land rovers to look for the lions. She inhaled a long deep breath. Walking towards the wooden cabins, she was staying in; she thought she heard a faint crunching noise of distant leaves rustling on the dry ground. Alicia tilted her head to where she thought the noise was coming from; she thought she could just make out a wide bold black line in the shape of a tree. As Alicia turned round it changed shape…

 

Home Learning 18-11-2011

Wow, some great answers on the reading challenge I gave you last week. We’re going to be looking more at this task at the start of next week, so I’ll give you more feedback then.

This week’s task is to have a go at another 100 Word Challenge. The prompt is

…as I turned round it changed shape…

Remember what we’ve been looking at in class. Sometimes one powerful word is worth far more than a number of less powerful ones. Also, although you only have 100 words try to make it a really action packed piece of writing. You can add them as a comment on this post, send it via dropittome, or bring them in on paper.