It was a windy Saturday morning and my mum was driving me along the edge of a shady road leading to my best friend’s house. That afternoon me and my best friend were to go out shopping in our local town. As my mum was turning around a sharp corner we heard a loud boom. The noise was SO loud! I looked out the windscreen and saw a large tree had fallen behind us; our car had escaped by a 10cm gap! But the car behind us was still stuck behind the tree, it tried to go around the tree but it was too tight!
100 WC Week 6 – Scarlett
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Oct
Mr Cobb's Class Blog 
Mrs Skinner
October 17, 2011 at 10:07 pm
This is such a great realistic story Scarlett! Those trees can make a really huge bang when they fall. I liked the way you gave your readers some detail with the distances. Thank you so much for taking the time to join the 100WC again!
mrcobbsclass
October 19, 2011 at 8:41 pm
Good writing Scarlett. I like how the sound is made by something like a tree which we see every day. Could you have described the tree in more detail by using something instead of large? Massive, old, ancient? Nevertheless, a great piece. Well done.