100 WC Week 6 – Sam H

17 Oct

One day my dad got angry with his computer. He decided to blow it up. So he did! The noise was so loud that the windows smashed and the house shook. It was also extreamly big.  It covered the whole globe and could be heared every where. But curiously not one living creature was hurt or killed. Dad was really embarrassed when it went on the news. He also set a record and won £1,000,000 !!! so dad bought a new ( really expensive ) computer it was solid gold!  Dad didn’t like it when the other champion ( in second place ) got really angry.


Posted by on October 17, 2011 in Information



3 responses to “100 WC Week 6 – Sam H

  1. Mrs Skinner

    October 17, 2011 at 10:04 pm

    Sam this is a super piece. Does your dad know you’ve written about him! I bet he would be embarrassed to make so much noise! You didn’t mention a competition so I was a bit muddled at the end. It is so good to see you on the 100WC!

  2. Sam's Dad

    October 18, 2011 at 9:16 am

    The diplodocus lifted her head. Something was wrong. Birds flapping furiously but not south toward their nesting grounds but in every direction, scattering, panicking. A cloud covered the sun, but it wasn’t a cloud, more like a mountain. Silently it plummeted, glowing a furious golden red with a long billowing ashen tail behind it. It smacked into the ground turning it to sea. Waves of dirt flew up and an invisible power picked her up throwing her to one side as she would to an old gnarled log. The noise was so loud it was the last thing she heard.

    (If I’d been doing the homework … but i like the idea of a golden computer 🙂

    • mrcobbsclass

      October 19, 2011 at 8:08 am

      Great 100 words James! I like the “silently it plummeted line”.


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