100 WC Week 6 – KH

16 Oct

The noise was so loud that my heart beat faster every second.So I got up to see what the noise was but there was no-one there, then I shouted ‘who’s making that noise?’, but there was no answer just an echo of my voise.Just then the noise got louder so I went to ask mum what the noise was but she didn’t know. it semed like it was me who cares.But I was so detemned to find out what the noise was.Then my mum came up and said it is time for bed,so I got in to bed and pretended to go to sleep but as soon as mum went out the door I got straight up.Then I went to the window and it was really windy all of a sudden, then I thought that I would never find out what the noise was. Then I turned around and saw that it was my cat hiding behind my bed,he was scared of the storm. So it was my cat making the noise all along!


Posted by on October 16, 2011 in Information



4 responses to “100 WC Week 6 – KH

  1. mrcobbsclass

    October 16, 2011 at 7:37 pm

    Well done. I like some of your word choices – like determined and pretended. Next time try and start sentences with different connectives, so sentences don’t always start with then. Perhaps use; after that, meanwhile or even next.

  2. Rm Horse lover

    October 17, 2011 at 8:57 am

    That is a really good piece of writing i was very exited about what the noise was!
    Well done Katy!

  3. Mrs Skinner

    October 17, 2011 at 3:40 pm

    Thank you for writing two pieces for the 100WC this week Katy. I’m not sure that such a loud noise could be made by a cat but then perhaps she is a noisy animal! 😉

  4. EG

    November 16, 2011 at 2:41 pm

    I liked your writing it was very good I don’t thinck it was bad atal it was all good. 🙂


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