Over this week we have been looking at different sentence structures and have had a go at creating our own sentences based on those used in Street Child. Have a look at these sentences that were written by one of the class. What do you like about it, what works well? What would you improve next time? Can you use the 3i approach (Imitate, Innovate and Invent) to write your own sentences based on the original structure and using a Street Child setting?
Jim slipped into the street, his heart pounding. Jim lowered his head and turned around away from the workhouse.