100 WC Week 5 – Scarlett

06 Oct

“I said he should have had a death sentence?” Its 2005 and my fellow police officers and I are trying to establish how our latest victim, Matthew has escaped. He has just returned from a trial and was found guilty. The crime in question was committed 5 years ago, when he stole valuable goods from France and shipped them to Italy but so far that’s all the evidence we have. Now Matthew is roaming the police station with no police officers knowing but us. “…suddenly the lights go out…” I know that voice, its Matthew, but now its pitch black, there’s been a power cut……


Posted by on October 6, 2011 in Information



2 responses to “100 WC Week 5 – Scarlett

  1. Mrs Skinner

    October 7, 2011 at 9:20 am

    This is such a great suspense piece of writing Scarlett! You have built the tension as you have gone along and left quite a cliff hanger! Brill!

  2. mrcobbsclass

    October 10, 2011 at 8:22 pm

    I really like this piece of writing, you build up the tension well towards the end. But, make sure you check your punctuation use, at times I think you need a few commas.


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