100 WC Week 3 – KB

27 Sep

The rain was pounding against my face as I sprinted further and further into the random darkness. I ran on, and on, until I couldn’t go on anymore. With the shadow of the castle looming over me I slumped myself down onto the cold wet stone. Where could I go next? Where could I run? I could hear the booming of his voice running after me. I curled myself up into a tight ball and closed my eyes. I held my breath as the loud footsteps ran past me, the iron footsteps, of an iron statue….

I was lucky, I got away


Posted by on September 27, 2011 in Information



7 responses to “100 WC Week 3 – KB

  1. Mrs Skinner

    September 28, 2011 at 5:58 pm

    I really liked this piece Kaiya because it is full of tension. You made my heart pound as I was reading it. One picky point – not sure darkness is ever random. Thank you so much for joining the 100WC!

  2. mrcobbsclass

    September 29, 2011 at 8:30 pm

    I like how you have started this piece, it got me wanting to find out why you were running. I also liked the use of the rhetorical questions. Well done Kaiya.

  3. horse lover etp

    September 30, 2011 at 7:58 pm

    amazing story kaiya

  4. BDG world saver

    October 3, 2011 at 8:58 am

    I think this a good story I like the verbs you yoused.

  5. Wendy

    October 3, 2011 at 11:48 pm

    Hello I am a student from busy bees at the bay. My name is Wendy.
    I think that your story was great.
    From Wendy

  6. katie

    October 5, 2011 at 8:57 am

    that was cool

  7. 5D

    October 5, 2011 at 9:07 am

    that was lucky

    sonny:) 🙂


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