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100 WC Week 3 – HS

27 Sep

There once was a statue.  When people walked passed him he moved.  Girls would just scream and run away.  Boys would just shake the statue’s hand.

But the statue was very lonely.  He asked the stonecutters to chip all the stone off his feet.  The stonecutters never listened to him because they only said ‘Hi ya!’

Finally a kind stonecutter said to the statue ‘Do you want to be released from your base’.  The statue said ‘Yes’.  The stonecutter broke through the stone with his hammer and chisel.  He smashed the base and the statue said ‘Thank you very much’.

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Posted by on September 27, 2011 in Information

 

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5 responses to “100 WC Week 3 – HS

  1. Rufus

    September 27, 2011 at 1:14 pm

    I 🙂 this one, I think it has a warm touch on you! 😀

     
    • mrcobbsclass

      September 27, 2011 at 1:16 pm

      What do you mean by it has a warm touch? What words help this feeling?

       
  2. Daniel.K

    September 27, 2011 at 2:53 pm

    Very good!!! 🙂 😉

     
  3. Mrs Skinner

    September 27, 2011 at 9:17 pm

    I would like to know where he went Holly once he was released. Of course that could be another story!! Great 100WC writing!

     
  4. mrcobbsclass

    September 29, 2011 at 8:38 pm

    Well done Holly, I like the way you’ve used a repeated idea Girls would..Boys would..” in your opening. I also like the use of finally to open the last paragraph. Next time try to expand your ideas with a little more detail and description.

     

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