100 WC Week 3 – KG

26 Sep

Once there was a man a man called the wachman he has been walking for miles. He comes from london the wachman has stoped for a rest but he still has 123 miles to go.”What a lovely veiw” exclaimed the wachman he now has his breath taken away by the amazing view of the emense building towering over him.A flash of lighting struck and he tried to move he couldnt he tried to talk but he couldnt and scream and shout but couldnt he is now
a statue he is still there today


Posted by on September 26, 2011 in Information



7 responses to “100 WC Week 3 – KG

  1. Mrs Skinner

    September 27, 2011 at 8:41 pm

    I like the idea behind this story KG! I loved the ‘has his breath taken away’. Really great use of vocabulary there! Thank you for writing for the 100WC!

  2. mrcobbsclass

    September 29, 2011 at 8:44 pm

    Well done Katy, some great use of language. I like the way the Watchman “exclaimed”. Make sure you read through to check for typing errors and missed punctuation.

  3. 5D

    October 5, 2011 at 9:00 am

    hi what a fabulos story i really like it .:)

  4. 5D

    October 5, 2011 at 9:02 am

    cool, I really like this !;)

  5. thishika,kira,lydia

    October 5, 2011 at 9:07 am

    wow that was amazing how did you get that much ideas well done!
    keep it up


  6. 5D

    October 5, 2011 at 9:08 am

    😛 COOL

  7. MRs H and class

    October 5, 2011 at 10:47 am

    HI Katy,
    We have been reading your stories each day here In Tasmania and really enjoyed the way you used interesting words and phrases in your writing. The sentences we liked the best were: “What a lovely veiw,” exclaimed the wachman. He now has his breath taken away by the amazing view of the immense building towering over him.
    from Busy Bees


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