After watching this short film we wrote descriptions of the room and the girl. Have a look at a few of them below. What do you think? What parts impress you? What would you suggest we improve on next time?
Posted by mrcobbsclass on May 11, 2011 in Information
May 11, 2011 at 1:31 pm
I think that the writing about the film Paraphernalia
is really good because they have put a lot of effort into them
May 11, 2011 at 1:32 pm
Well done! I think there all really good. I especially like the phrase
“She could see nothing but darkness.”
May 11, 2011 at 1:36 pm
fAB! I like the bit ‘ eerie silence.
May 14, 2011 at 11:12 am
I did’nt really like it because the characters were a bit dull and the animation was a bit jumbled up and basic – I was expecting it to do more things.
May 16, 2011 at 7:22 am
Great I love all of them well done
June 7, 2011 at 1:54 pm
I really like these, they are really well worded!
June 7, 2011 at 2:09 pm
nice hand writing great story to
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