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Paraphernalia

11 May

After watching this short film we wrote descriptions of the room and the girl.  Have a look at a few of them below.  What do you think?  What parts impress you?  What would you suggest we improve on next time?

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7 Comments

Posted by on May 11, 2011 in Information

 

7 responses to “Paraphernalia

  1. LC

    May 11, 2011 at 1:31 pm

    I think that the writing about the film Paraphernalia
    is really good because they have put a lot of effort into them

     
  2. SB

    May 11, 2011 at 1:32 pm

    Well done! I think there all really good. I especially like the phrase
    “She could see nothing but darkness.”

     
  3. KB

    May 11, 2011 at 1:36 pm

    fAB! I like the bit ‘ eerie silence.

     
  4. JH

    May 14, 2011 at 11:12 am

    I did’nt really like it because the characters were a bit dull and the animation was a bit jumbled up and basic – I was expecting it to do more things.

     
  5. Ef

    May 16, 2011 at 7:22 am

    Great I love all of them well done

     
  6. Annie

    June 7, 2011 at 1:54 pm

    I really like these, they are really well worded!

    Annie:)

     
  7. mckenzie

    June 7, 2011 at 2:09 pm

    nice hand writing great story to

     

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