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Moon Man

09 May

As we have been looking at the Moon Man story.  Use your knowledge of the story to write a short version of the story for the Year 3 children.  What are the key events?  How can you make it sound exciting and get across the main message of the story?

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Posted by on May 9, 2011 in Information

 

15 responses to “Moon Man

  1. St Es

    May 9, 2011 at 10:27 am

    There once was a man called moon. He had two wives, and two sons. one day the two sons asked their dad, moon, if they could go fishing for the first time. there dad said yes so they went to the nearest river too fish. they were succsesful and they caught many fish but instead of sharing it with their family they ate the fish themselves. they soon went home but only brought back the bones of the fish. There dad was furious. the boys regreted what they did and promised that they would go back to the river tommorow and catch some more fish. But the next day they did the same thing and came back with only bones again. there dad was even more furious this time so he thought up a plan to teach the two boys a lesson…..

     
  2. BK&LH

    May 9, 2011 at 10:27 am

    One day, long ago there was a man called Moon. He had 2 sons and 2 wives. The boys wanted to go fishing and feed the fish to the family,but instead when they caught the fish they ate all of the fish and only bring back the bones. Their father was very cross but when they said sorry he said ” go back and catch some more fish.” So they went back and got some more fish but they had another feast. there father was furious and decide to build a fish trap and he said ” go back and fish with the fish trap” and he follewed them and killed them….

     
  3. cp jp

    May 9, 2011 at 10:27 am

    There was a man called Moon who had 2 sons amd 2 wives.His sons asked if they could go for there first fishing lesson and he said yes.They where very succsesful aand caught lots of fish.There dad asked for some fish but the boys ate all of them and took the bones back.The nekt day the same thig happened…

     
  4. LL & HB

    May 9, 2011 at 10:27 am

    One day two boys asked there father to go fishing. They were very successful, but they ate the fish and only brought bones back. There father was very angry with them but they promised to not to do it again. They did it again. this time the father got very angry and built a fishing net and killed them….

     
  5. MK SB

    May 9, 2011 at 10:27 am

    Moon man
    Sons of Moon man go fishing very sucessful.
    Men eat fish they don’t bring fish home.
    Moon man is furious but forgives them.
    Sons go back next day and do the same thing!
    Moon man wants to punish his sons.
    Moon man builds fish trap.
    Mooon man traps sons in fish trap…….

     
  6. KB SH

    May 9, 2011 at 10:27 am

    One day the moon was a man and he had two sons and two wives. His two sons wanted to go fishing for the first time and they said they will bring the fish home to share with their family, they were very successfu, But instead of bringing the fish they had caught back they had a feast. When they got back they showed the basket to Moon, he was very angry…

     
  7. tj am

    May 9, 2011 at 10:28 am

    before the moon, two boys went fishing. they catch lots of fish but instead of bringing them back to thier dad, called Moon man, they eat them. thier father is upset but he forgives them. the next day they do the same thing…

     
  8. Ef / Cm

    May 9, 2011 at 10:28 am

    THE MOON MAN
    Two young boys went fishing and ate all of the fish. All they came back with were bones. The moon, father was angre ………..

     
  9. LH TB

    May 9, 2011 at 10:28 am

    Long ago before there was a moon there was a man called moon. Two young boys go fishing and are very successful.
    They say they will bring fish for supper, but bring only the bones.
    Their father is very cross, but forgives them when they say they will bring fish tommorow.
    However the next day they go fishing again and eat them all and bring back the bones.
    Their father intends to punish them for it.
    Moon makes a fish trap and tells his sons he can use it to catch fish.
    He follows them and kills his sons…

     
  10. KSMW

    May 9, 2011 at 10:28 am

    Before there was a Moon in the sky there was a Man called Moon and he had two wives and two sons. One day the sons went hunting, they were succsesful. But the sons ate all the fish ……..

     
  11. IG & TC

    May 9, 2011 at 10:28 am

    Before the moon, there was a man called Moon. Moon had two wives and two sons.
    One day, the sons told their dad (Moon) that they were going to go fishing and bring back enough fish for the whole family.
    They were very succesful. But instead of keeping their promise to Moon they ate all the fish on their own, and brought back only the fish bones.
    Moon was furious, but forgave them when they offered to do it properly again the next day. But they did the same thing and brought back the bones again!
    MOON WANTED REVENGE…

     
  12. hhes

    May 9, 2011 at 10:29 am

    When the moon was not in the sky there was a man.When his sons were old enough to hunting for the family. He let them go to the river to get fish but they were greedy and ate all the fish. They came back but there were only bones, so moon got angry and set them off again but the they to greedy and ate them all . they came and moon was really angry so next time killed them after that mothers were worried and looked for them and they were dead in the river so they burned moon alive and thats how the moon began…

     
  13. NP KH

    May 9, 2011 at 10:30 am

    The Moon Man
    There was once a man called Moon, he had 2 sons and 2 wives. One day the sons asked if they could go fishing in the river. The boys fished loads of fish and they had a big feast…

     
  14. jhew

    May 9, 2011 at 10:31 am

    Moon Man
    Once apon a time there was a man who lived with his two wives and two sons.One day his sons came up to him and asked if they could go hunting for the first time. The two sons were very sucsessfull but they ate the fish. The two sons went again but did the same thing.

     
  15. mrcobbsclass

    May 9, 2011 at 10:33 am

    What is the key message of this creation myth? What does it teach us?

     

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