Letter to Petie

24 Mar

These great pieces of writing by KH, ST and LL were written in Literacy today.  Have a look at them and add your comments to this post. Have they captured the life of Tom at the farm?  What features of letters have they used?  What could they develop to improve their letter writing.


Posted by on March 24, 2011 in Information


6 responses to “Letter to Petie

  1. mw

    March 24, 2011 at 2:48 pm

    Seth that is a great piece of writing it is like a real letter

    • mrcobbsclass

      March 24, 2011 at 2:51 pm

      Why is it like a real letter MW? What features does it have which make it realistic?

  2. TJ

    March 24, 2011 at 2:56 pm

    wow ST that letter was increadably good i liked the bit when it said: bubba is not my sort of guy

  3. JH

    March 24, 2011 at 2:57 pm

    I think that SH’s is the best because the story includes a long letter and He’s done just that.I also like it because it has good words and has brillient paragraphs.

  4. storm [mps]

    March 25, 2011 at 1:57 pm

    thats a good pecse and I give it a 9 out of ten.

  5. JL

    March 30, 2011 at 6:31 pm

    Not that I’m biased, but I think LL’s letter is cool. I gotta say that though! (By the way I’m LL’s Dad)


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