Hindleap Shelter Sales

09 Mar

In Literacy we have been looking at persuasive writing.  Here are some examples of Estate Agent property details for a shelter we built at Hindleap Warren.  What do you think about them?  What has been done well, what could be improved? Add your comments to this post.

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Posted by on March 9, 2011 in Literacy


One response to “Hindleap Shelter Sales

  1. LL

    March 9, 2011 at 4:19 pm

    I think they were all really persuasive especially BDGs one and I think the set out was really cool and it really persuasive and I really wanted to buy it


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