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Sun Kennings

16 Feb

Inspired by the sudden appearance of the sun we wrote kennings to describe it.  Have a look at these images of a selection of them.

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What do you think of these poems?  What is good, what could be improved? Add your comments to this post.

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14 Comments

Posted by on February 16, 2011 in Information

 

14 responses to “Sun Kennings

  1. Ms Wise

    February 16, 2011 at 12:09 pm

    What a great collection of sun kennings. There are some very different interpretations of what the sun does or reminds us of. I like the lines
    A bird awakner and A light creator
    When we do kennings, I will show my class these excellent examples.
    Well done!
    Ms Wise
    Bure Park Primary

     
  2. LL

    February 16, 2011 at 1:04 pm

    Well done every one there really good and I really like the illustrations There really amazing!and bang on 😉 🙂

     
  3. MW

    February 16, 2011 at 1:06 pm

    I realy like all the poems because you can see they have worked hard on all of them

     
  4. EF

    February 16, 2011 at 1:09 pm

    i think that all of them are great but i think that SB was really great .

     
  5. KS

    February 16, 2011 at 1:14 pm

    I really like these desins they are really colourful and I love the poems.:)

     
  6. BDG

    February 16, 2011 at 1:17 pm

    I like the visualiser because you can see each others work and all the class can help you make your work better:)

     
  7. JWH

    February 16, 2011 at 1:18 pm

    I like A golden blazer and A snow melter

     
  8. Owen Davis

    February 16, 2011 at 1:28 pm

    They must of worked really hard on this work and they all have lots of adjectives.

     
  9. Mr Richards

    February 18, 2011 at 11:42 pm

    The children really enjoyed this exercise and came up with a lot of descriptions about the sun in their poetry. I was particularly impressed with MW “Ground Scorcher”. Well done Foxes on an excellent piece of work.

     
  10. KS

    February 20, 2011 at 3:13 pm

    I have thought of another one ”A freckle painter”

     
  11. kh

    February 20, 2011 at 3:46 pm

    Well you can see that they hav worked on then reallyhaed and they hav uesed lots of adgectives I also think they are really good and they uesed lots of good sentencesand it lookes like they worked really haed on thes.

     
  12. Megan

    March 8, 2011 at 1:26 pm

    Hello
    I really like all your work on Sun Kennings work you have done you have also used lots og adgective in your peice of work.
    Well done!!!

     
  13. jakestephenson

    March 8, 2011 at 2:39 pm

    It’s great to see so many amazing sunny poems, surrounded by glorious illustrations! It lightened me right up when I read these! I can see you have spent a great amount of time on these!
    Well Done, Very Well Done!
    Jake
    😉

     
  14. Charlie from Werrington Primary School

    March 10, 2011 at 10:43 am

    These poems are amazing, I think they are really imaginative! Well done, and remember keep blogging! 🙂 😉

     

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