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An Inspiring Frosty Morning

24 Nov

What a beautiful morning.  We’ve been inspired to describe the scene outside our classroom.  Ben and Bridie’s writing was randomly chosen to share on the blog.  Please add your comments to our post, we’d like to hear what you thought of the writing.

I stepped out of the warmth of the classroom and had a refreshing feeling and felt so alive. The frost was like a white blanket covering the grass. The sunlight was like a disco ball when it hit the icy frost.

Click on this audio player to hear another piece of work,

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6 Comments

Posted by on November 24, 2010 in Learning Journey, Literacy

 

6 responses to “An Inspiring Frosty Morning

  1. ES

    November 24, 2010 at 10:55 am

    It was good but i think it needs to discribe more things outside.

     
  2. MW

    November 24, 2010 at 11:38 am

    I liked all the acspresiv langwige

     
  3. ef

    November 24, 2010 at 2:53 pm

    it was ok bit short but good i like it a lot

     
  4. SB

    November 24, 2010 at 4:51 pm

    I thought it was really good!!! Maybe next time you could describe it a bit more?

     
  5. Kb

    November 24, 2010 at 6:32 pm

    I liked all the Adjectives.There FAB peices of work.

     
  6. LK

    November 24, 2010 at 8:25 pm

    Lovely diction and enunciation what a superstar 🙂

     

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