Uplevelling a sentence

21 Oct

Inspired by our friends at John Davies Primary School in Nottinghamshire, why not try and uplevel a sentence.  You can see an example on their blog – each new sentence adds in another detail to the sentence.  Try;

The lock opened

What words could you add to make this a better sentence.


Posted by on October 21, 2010 in Information


2 responses to “Uplevelling a sentence

  1. st

    October 23, 2010 at 6:45 am

    as the creepy shadow moved faster and faster towards him.

  2. LH

    November 1, 2010 at 7:53 pm

    without a single creek.


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